Floating Away

A love poem.

I close my eyes and float away

on clouds of fluffy white

dreaming that I am wrapped

in your sweet arms tonight.

My head resting on your

broad shoulder

drawing close as the 

night grows colder.

You gently caress 

my long brown hair

planting soft tender 

kisses everywhere.

Ever strong 

yet oh so tender

enticing me

into complete surrender.

With murmured sighs

and louder moans

you sweetly bring me

to utter deeper groans.

Turning your lady 

into molten fire

totally unquenchable

this desire.

Then held soft and close

in your arms once more

so much more in love

with this man I adore.

Reviews

[Violeta]

I loved this! You take us on a ride without revealing much of any detail, you have achieved showing over telling! Your rhyme scheme flows excellently, none of the words feel forced, and just... Ah! I loved it! "So much more in love with this man I adore..."

[Shy Girl]

Love poems are harder to write then sad or lonely ones. This one is the first I've read of your works, and it makes me want to find someone all over again and bask in that loving embrace, before, after, and during our close times or just being us. From the start, to the ending, this write just filled me with rememberence of new love and adoration to that one person I found. I enjoyed this very much. I'll keep your words in mind when i'm with my somebody special. Thank you for sharing. =)

[Inyourshadow]

Very tender beginnings leading to the romance love and thus developing to the heat of passion, love the molten reference. You really capture the beauty in the shared moments between two people. Keep em' coming

[grayhaven]

Beautifully written my friend. From sweet tenderness to burning desire to basking in the afterglow.......Bravo!!!

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

This is realy good!!! I am like in love with your work!!!! Good job and keep up the good work!!!!! :)

[Raven Starhawk]

You always challenge beauty with the steady flow of elegant words. This is soft and dreamy, truly something to be adored.

[J Todd Underhill]

I am impressed, this one really spoke to me, and I wish tonight to be laying with my lady and of course work gets in the way of that.