The Lost Key

A sad love poem.

Eyes so full of innocence

willing to believe 

every word he spoke

so much love to give.

She carefully took her heart

and offered it as a sacrifice

then giving him the key

to the priceless treasure.

He held it so carefully

at the very start

so that she felt so safe,

so sure, so comfortable.

But then he lost the key

unable to get in

he grew distant and cold

then he walked away.

She fell to her knees

crying as if the heart

that was so full of love

was about to break.

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

You must have needed to say this Sis as not like you to free style, the poem still beautiful shows what many have known and felt, the pain of becoming distant from the heart you thought your own. Chin up and keep em' coming

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Such realism here...I lke the sadness here :)

[Raven Starhawk]

All in all this was really good at getting the point across and your details were three dimensional masterpieces.

[aviiar:))]

:((aww..dat´s so sad..
great flow of emotion

[J Todd Underhill]

A Sad love poem indeed, he should not have been so careless as to lose the key to such a valuable treasure. Shame on him for losing it!