Totally Rejected

A sad poem.

She took the garments she had folded away

cried over them wondered what happened this day

love everlasting and promises true

laid broken and discarded like these items so new

things she had bought for her honeymoon

that was suppose to happen so very soon

no use in saving them any more

because of the man she had adored

he threw her away she was totally bereft

completely devasted when he left

he'd rejected the love she so freely gave

threw it back in her face the love she had craved

he didn't want her womanly curves

she wasn't the woman he thought he deserved

but she had so much love she wanted to give

only to bring him pleasure as long as he lived

now she sits with tears flowing down her face

and longing so desparately for a lover's embrace,

needing to be loved and treasured

wanting a man who was a price above measure

full of passion and desire

longing for someone to put out the fire

but instead she's alone and dejected

hanging her head...

totally rejected.

Reviews

[Raven Starhawk]

I think at some point in life everyone feels the sting of rejection. It could be through a relationship or job related, but no matter what it may be the hurt is there. For me though the hurt is always greater when in a relationship or longing for someone whom does not feel the same way.

[Inyourshadow]

Hell no Sis, this is not the way you need not feel dejected as he was obviously a fool, we all know the real you and know it is a loss on his part not yours. Now chin up and move forward leaving this pain where it belongs behind you where I can shoulder it for you as I always do ~ In Your Shadow

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

That that doesn't kill us only makes us stronger... the rejection of love is the hardest of all but it will make us more appreciate the love that embraces us.

[J Todd Underhill]

Ah no one should ever feel this way. I know I have felt totally rejected from time to time and it is the worst feeling of them all. I also know if I do one thing with my life I want to let the world know they are loved.