Cowboy of My Dreams

Cowboy of My Dreams

A Poem by Daytonight











He comes striding in
with long loping gait
pure poured perfection
and I just can't wait.

Stetson riding low
upon sweating brow
Levis even lower
hugging his hips somehow.

After his day of roping and riding
hes ready for his evening to start
as he moseys into my life
and lassoes my untamed heart.

© 2011 Daytonight


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This is exquisite in a sense it resides within a deep beautiful heart that can only begin to release lines such as these.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the rhyme and rhythm in this poem as it flows so nice and easy. It's so very descriptive and I can actually imagine the poem from line to line.

WindSong

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice, and captured the cowboy kinda romance really well I thought :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very wild and romantic. Now it is time to ride into the sunset.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Romantic and a little hint of sensual tension within this piece, the second stanza maybe. Love the pic and the opening as well as the last two lines, beautiful. Keep em' coming

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Daytonight
Daytonight

LA



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I am a hopeless romantic who still believes in happily ever after. I have a passion for writing poetry. My poetry tends to be tender sensual love poetry with some heartbreak along the way. I also l.. more..

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