One Day

Waiting too long.

One day

we will be together

we will have a home of our own

all of our dreams will come true.

One day

you will take me in your arms

and make sweet love to me

until I beg for you to stop.

One day

we will travel

see all there is to see together

visit all the places we want to go.

One day 

we will snuggle by the fire

swim in the ocean

gather wild flowers.

Such a shame

you can only hold thin air

because one day

came too late.

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

We will snuggle by the fire ~ sounds lovely, you also use the serene to set the scene, sad tale in last stanza but overall beautifully done, here's hoping it doesn't come to late for you both to truely enjoy all these things together sis. Keep em' coming

[Sleeping Maiden]

A Lovely read! I love it! it flows so well. And it really shows the affection of both lovers. Nice twist at the end.. =) Great write!

[OT]

one day - to keep putting things off until it's too late - and air is only the thing to truly grasp - great write!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This is a really nice piece. It is adorable and I could feel the love in the ending. The ending turned in bittersweet. I like it. Thanks for sharing.

[WindSong]

What a dream! Superb writing as always! I love it!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very beautiful, love the twist and surprise at the end :)