Th Man Whom I Adore

Th Man Whom I Adore

A Poem by Daytonight
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A sappy love poem.

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When I am with you
I get all warm and fuzzy inside
the silliest grin appears
it's just something I can't hide.

Just one word from you
and I melt like butter that's hot
one look, one touch
I'll give you all that I've got.

My hazel eyes
become a calf-eyed brown
whenever you happen
to come around.

You send my heart
skipping with joy
put butterflies in my tummy
that's what you do to me boy.

You drive me crazy
with the smile that you give
the one that's only for me
the one that makes me want to live.

Baby these things you do
and so very much more
for you are my true love
the man whom I adore.

© 2011 Daytonight


Author's Note

Daytonight
This is written in my own style.

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Aww this is so sweet!

:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a beautiful piece that tickles the heart...I love it! Great job! = ]

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is an absolutey beautiful love poem. Great writing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I was "Read-requested" by a secret(?) admirer of your work... I would have paused regardless... heart and style...good flow and tone... and an afters of soft...

Take care,
Chris

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awww! If I had read this like a week and a half ago i would have just melted but right now this doesnt really apply:( I love the poem though, always loving ur emotions u put into ur pieces. I think the rhyme is appropriate as well:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aaaaw!!!:) oh my goodness this was really sweet !!!!!! i loved it !:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lovely

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely poem!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is quite a lovely poem, very descriptive and a great read. This was a breath of fresh air!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful, romantic love it loads :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Daytonight
Daytonight

LA



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I am a hopeless romantic who still believes in happily ever after. I have a passion for writing poetry. My poetry tends to be tender sensual love poetry with some heartbreak along the way. I also l.. more..

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