Th Man Whom I Adore

A sappy love poem.

When I am with you

I get all warm and fuzzy inside

the silliest grin appears

it's just something I can't hide.

Just one word from you

and I melt like butter that's hot

one look, one touch

I'll give you all that I've got.

My hazel eyes

become a calf-eyed brown

whenever you happen

to come around.

You send my heart

skipping with joy

put butterflies in my tummy

that's what you do to me boy.

You drive me crazy

with the smile that you give

the one that's only for me

the one that makes me want to live.

Baby these things you do

and so very much more

for you are my true love

the man whom I adore.

Author's Note

This is written in my own style.

Reviews

[Just Cat]

Aww this is so sweet!

:)

[FemmeSpookyCorpse]

This is a beautiful piece that tickles the heart...I love it! Great job! = ]

[WindSong]

This is an absolutey beautiful love poem. Great writing!

[Chris]

I was "Read-requested" by a secret(?) admirer of your work... I would have paused regardless... heart and style...good flow and tone... and an afters of soft...

Take care,
Chris

[Dreamer]

Awww! If I had read this like a week and a half ago i would have just melted but right now this doesnt really apply:( I love the poem though, always loving ur emotions u put into ur pieces. I think the rhyme is appropriate as well:)

[brenda]

aaaaw!!!:) oh my goodness this was really sweet !!!!!! i loved it !:)

[The fallen of innocence]

lovely

[Becky C Strukamp]

Lovely poem!!

[nevermindfan1991]

This is quite a lovely poem, very descriptive and a great read. This was a breath of fresh air!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Beautiful, romantic love it loads :)