Uncharted Course

Newness of love.

Walking down uncharted course

strolling hand and hand

embarking on predestined path

feeling like love's so grand.

Everything is fresh and new

like the smell after rain

walking with my precious one

falling in love again.

Child like faith and simple trust

we slowly build together

so that when storms appear

there's nothing we can't weather.

Author's Note

Image: Photobucket

A love poem written in my own style and from my heart.

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

Child like faith and simple trust ~ for this is all we have when we chance our hearts to another, you really pen romance and the deeper feelings with such sweetness, keep em' coming

[Brittany W]

So short and simple and lovely, Nice :)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I love the middle stanza and the last two lines... really nice love poem. :)

[Stormy Weather]

Awww, this is lovely. :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A lovely poem, really enjoyable read, can feel the love when reading :)

[Raven Starhawk]

Very effective piece of literature that I have to favor. It is a truly delightful light shining down on a dreary day. I mean my day was dreary, not your poem. ^^* Your poem was excellent.