Uncharted Course

Newness of love.

Walking down uncharted course

strolling hand and hand

embarking on predestined path

feeling like love's so grand.

Everything is fresh and new

like the smell after rain

walking with my precious one

falling in love again.

Child like faith and simple trust

we slowly build together

so that when storms appear

there's nothing we can't weather.

Author's Note

Image: Photobucket

A love poem written in my own style and from my heart.

Reviews

[Gomer LePoet]

aw gosh this was awful cute. nice rhyme and can't beat young love!

[Arianna]

i love it. your style is amazing and its one of those almost too cute moments that makes your heart swell :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

There is no greater rush then facing life with the one you love... a wonderfully romantic piece.

[Just Cat]

Sweet and innocent. I like it.


:)

[Nicky Wilson]

Really just beautiful, innocence leaps off the page and we are taken back to that time where everything is about puppies and rainbows and nothing can hurt us because of that innocence! Loved it :)

[Dreamer]

such innocence... quiet and calm feelings:)

[Stephanie Slayer]

stunning beautiful work

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Perfect, absolutely perfect, rhythm and rhyme are amazing and the message is divine

[Becky C Strukamp]

A very lovely poem. It certainly shows that it is from your heart.

[nevermindfan1991]

I like this poem a lot. It reminds me of the innocence of child, the feeling we had, when he feel in love for the first time. The longing to return to that. Great Poem....