Woman to the Core

Woman to the Core

A Poem by Daytonight
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She's not perfect but she's all woman.

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You might think she's clingy 
but she'll treat you right
meeting your needs
loving you all night.

She might seek reassurance
she's just wanting to hear
how very much you love her
as you hold her so near.

She might act alike a baby
at times when she will cry
just give her tender kisses
as her eyes you seek to dry.

Although she is not perfect
she is woman to the core
one that really does love you
the same that you adore.

© 2011 Daytonight


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Daytonight
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True poem!!! There are so many rules for this thing called love and women as especially expected to carry them out. The does and don'ts and when we dont act accordingly we're 'clingy' or anything else they so feel to label us. The truth is sometimes the emotions are so strong that you constantly feel drawn to them. Then again maybe I'm speaking from a bias perspective.lol Good write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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This poem is sweet, elegant, and simple. I enjoyed it very much = ] It shows the fragility of women, although we are also strong. Your word choice is beautiful, and it clings to the heart. Fantastic piece...great work! = ]

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very beautiful and romantic poem indeed!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I like the duality to this, the view of the man (Clingy) and the woman (Cuddles)
I like the feel of this piece and it just... speaks to me I guess.
Nicely written!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is so true, all woman wants is for the person that they love give them what they want and make there world worth being part of it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the idea of clingy, at least it is almost a cuddle lol, ahhh cuddles!!! sorry digressing you pen the double edge of need so perfectly we are clingy if we love too much and distant if not enough, make up their minds and shut up as their lips waste so much time that could be better spent kissing, Keep em' coming

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

well written keep on pennin'!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very true. A well writen poem. It realy sums up a woman.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Where can I find this woman lol. Great write indeed :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so beautiful! And it really rings true for many of us :) We're not perfect, but we'll still love you with all we have.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I have to say after reading entry after entry from you, your works remind me of someone I know from another poetry site. I will not say but the similarities are astounding. I was a fan of her work before departing the site. I am a fan of yours after arriving here. Glad you are the way you are. You make me smile!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Daytonight
Daytonight

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