Confusion

I just don't understand.

My mind is in a state of upheavel

not knowing which is good and which is evil

the lines seem to have blurred and been crossed

I'm caught in the shuffle, first turned then tossed

thrown in the air only to come crashing back down

feeling like a fool and looking like a clown.

Unable to decipher or comprehend

are you a foe or are you my friend

is this love that we have shared all these years

why has my happiness now turned to fears

why oh why can't you explain to me

what has become of us, why can't you see?

Reviews

[FallenWingz]

many unanswered questions in this one.....expresses well the confusion that is within you....but the answers to all these questions you have layed down is already inside you, you just need to find it and seek within your soul and you will get the answer. I am becoming very fond of your work.. :)

[kymee]

Check syllables in your writing. the 2nd stanza is different than the first. Not all sentences. A love story. What exactly was the evil? Him or something else? If you're that messed up, your with the wrong person. Move on

[Rainbow-Ribbons]

Unable to comprehend, are you a foe or are you a friend; so difficult to know!! Is this person saying what they mean, are they meaning what they say? How to know, how to be sure? Ask yourself, ask your heart, what is right, what is true. Ask your heart what you should do; then, listen. Listen to your heart, hear what it says, it will not lead you astray. Listen to your heart. Listen. . .

[Inyourshadow]

Maybe you two need to really sit down and talk as this sounds like you really are doubting everything you two have or ever had. Painfully honest and so in need of answers, Keep em' coming

[BrynnaW.]

Just like SoulCrusader said: "Another wonderful poem as always." I totally agree. I haven't seen rhyming poems in forever so I really enjoyed that! Thanks for writing it! Good job!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Another wonderful poem as always :)

[Nicky Wilson]

I love it !! I relate to this is so many ways.You have the ability to capture your readers emotions that just pop off the page very well done another great write ! :)