Shattered Dreams

Hurting

Broken trust

shattered dreams

scattered like dust

devoid it seems.

Heart is breaking

no bandaid will do

hands are shaking

trouble breathing too.

Don't understand 

all of this mess

was it too great a demand

I can't fathom a guess.

Left lost and lonely

dazed and confused

you were my one and only

now I feel so used.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

Why do so many PLAY others when there are so many better things to do, kissing and cuddling trumps fighting and schememing every day of the week, so if he is hurting you so cut him loose and look else where he is not deserving of such romantic poetry and such a heart. keep your chin up sis and keep em' coming

[Chris]

So many wishes...
so many dreams.
...and we look so deep within
and life takes so much away.

Take care,
Chris

[Sukriti Suki]

Nice!! I like the flow and the tone of this piece.

[Stormy Weather]

There are alot of bad feelings that can be felt.....but, in my opinion, the feeling from being used is probably in the top 5. Not alot compares to the feeling of putting all your energy into handing over your heart and soul to someone, only to have them rip it away and throw it on the ground...wow, I just said feeling way too many times....but great poem!

[kdpgrahi]

Life is definitely an enigma. Some say life is a dream , but as it is said here dreams a re repeatedly shattered. It is a way of life and I think not to worry and not to feel used.
An excellent piece of poetry. Clear and succinct. I enjoyed the reading

[Raven Starhawk]

Broken trust is often something we deal with as some of our loved ones have a untrusting nature. I mean it is so like it that the ones close to us are the ones with the power to hurt us the most. Very well done.

[Brittany W]

very great job on this poem, you kept the rhyming throughout and you could feel the emotions in the poem, fabulous job.

[BrynnaW.]

Good job! I can feel the sadness... Lately everyone has been writing sad stories.. Anyways, very well written! Keep writing!

[FallenWingz]

oh i know this tale so very good...ppl playing with you and tossing you aside...but in the end, just maybe this werent meant to be, yes we all have to get our heartsbroken, but in the end once we stronger we will find what our hearts seek..true love.

[FamaSemperVivat]

Such sadness, such loss your soul ripped apart, why did he take a piece of your heart. So well done, my friend!