It's Time

dealing with pain

It's time to hide

pull up on the inside

can't take the pain any longer

only getting weaker, not stronger.

It's time to cower

tear down flowers from the bower

can't take the pain any more

curl up in a ball on the floor.

It's time to turn out the light

welcome the dark of the night

what ever happened to one you could trust

seems like it was just a big flat bust.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[BrynnaW.]

Really sad and brilliant! I loved it! It's different and that is what makes it entertaining. Very well written! No mistakes, not that I would post them in a review.... Good job and keep on writing!

[Carrion.]

amazing..
:l
"only getting weaker, not stronger"
really got me.
good job.

[Akshat♥]

you are absolutely right in this..
poem is nice..can relate easily :)
sometimes are in this situation where
we have no other choice just to hide our-self..

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A wonderful emotional write, top poem:)

[Becky C Strukamp]

Beautifully written poem!!

[kdpgrahi]

A very good poem that I read it again again. I like the rhythmic flow. Crafting of the words excellent. A job well done

[Raven Starhawk]

A lovely addition to your already brilliantly amazing collection of great poems.

[light and ashes]

Wow!!!!! This is SO GORGEOUS! I love it.