Waiting For Crumbs to Fall

Waiting For Crumbs to Fall

A Poem by Daytonight
"

how it feels to wait for him constantly and he doesn't bother showing up

"
I'm like a dog 
sitting under the table
waiting for crumbs to fall.

Waiting...
waiting...
waiting...

Hoping you will
remember me sitting here
waiting for crumbs to fall.

Waiting...
waiting...
waiting...

Suppose to be
happy whenever they do
so I'm waiting for crumbs to fall.

Waiting...
waiting...
waiting...

Curled up now
with tears streaming down my face
while I'm waiting for crumbs to fall.

Waiting...
waiting...
waiting...

© 2011 Daytonight


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

but they never do?
love ya sis, you shouldn't have to wait for crumbs

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sometimes waiting feels like the worse thing in the world. I love your poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The waiting is awful. Great poem, and I really enjoyed reading it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love it, metaphor and the style and layout of the poem are awesome:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

201 Views
4 Reviews
Rating
Added on June 25, 2011
Last Updated on June 25, 2011
Tags: Sad, Nougest, Thoughts, Pain, Personal

Author

Daytonight
Daytonight

LA



About
I am a hopeless romantic who still believes in happily ever after. I have a passion for writing poetry. My poetry tends to be tender sensual love poetry with some heartbreak along the way. I also l.. more..

Writing
Waking Me Waking Me

A Poem by Daytonight



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..