Never

just never

Never have I felt 

so 

unloved, unwanted, undesired.

Never has the pain

hurt

so much

not a constant sharp stab

but intermitent with

a deep dull ache.

Never have I wanted

to die

more than I do

right at this moment

than spend one more 

night alone.

Never...

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

Screw him Sis and that's swearing which you know I hate to do, he needs to open his eyes and see what he's doing as this piece screams your sadness and your pain paining me. Chin up and pen once more of romance as you are a master of the soft lilt of love. Keep em' coming

[Dreamer]

Emotions engraved into every word!! It must take a true experience to inspire such emotions

[STAR CHILD]

this is so sad and it made me want to cry it is so heartbreaking

[Carrion.]

i completly understand..
nice work.
im definately gonna read more..

[Stormy Weather]

Your pain surrounds me as I read this. Like a beautiful blanket. Fabulously written. :)

[WindSong]

A very sad and lonely heart's poem, but very poetically conceived and delivered. Great work!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Such a powerful, poetic poem that expresses loneliness perfectly, not a word is wasted in this poem. Perfection indeed:)