Making Plans

Making Plans

A Poem by Daytonight
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A love poem

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Late night chats
making plans
getting to know each other
as well as we can.

The longer we are together
the less it will do
being separated sweetheart
not being with you.

So we sit and we discuss
arrange for you to come
but it seems an eternity
and even then some.

Heads bowed together
whispering love's sweetest words
sharing our hearts
making ourselves understood.

Longing for the day
you walk through the door
take me up in your arms
and maybe even more.

© 2011 Daytonight


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Daytonight
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What you write is always what basically others are thinking- but in a way only you can write. Being away from someone you love (it seems like you're in a long distance relationship?) can always seem like a eternity. May fave part is: "Heads bowed together/whispering love's sweetest words" because it bring to mind a very pleasant image.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Very nicely written. This definitely love. Except when you see this in movies, the guy always finds another chick and the other girl finds out. *Tear* :) Anyways, very good and now I have higher expectations for your writing! Keep up the good work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What you write is always what basically others are thinking- but in a way only you can write. Being away from someone you love (it seems like you're in a long distance relationship?) can always seem like a eternity. May fave part is: "Heads bowed together/whispering love's sweetest words" because it bring to mind a very pleasant image.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

T'awwwhh...thiss is so sweet and beautiful (:
Amazing write my friend ^_^

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Daytonight
Daytonight

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I am a hopeless romantic who still believes in happily ever after. I have a passion for writing poetry. My poetry tends to be tender sensual love poetry with some heartbreak along the way. I also l.. more..

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