Drawn Together

My own style and thoughts from my heart

From somewhere in the distant background

music plays softly, drawing us together

we dare to lock gazes, smile shyly

there is no need to speak 

our hearts are talking for us

I turn away first with a blush staining my cheeks.

We both know something so special, so magical has happened

surely a spark, nay, a current passed between us

this electricity is too strong to resist

pulled together by these charges.

Our bodies sway in rhythm, in perfect unison

we see no one else as we are lost in each other

you whirl me around and my feet don't even touch the ground

they must surely be in the clouds.

My eyes drink you in as though you are a heady wine

and as such, you have made me giddy

I don't know which way is left or right any more

I only know that I fit perfectly in your arms

that is where I belong and I never want to leave.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[from the desk of]

Beautiful and sensual, full of imagery and flows so nicely. You always seem to express yourself very well, I enjoyed reading very much.

[Pumpkinspice]

Beautifully sensual. It's been a very long time since I've felt giddy. But never mind that. This is wonderfully romantic. Loved it!
Pumpkin:)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A wonderful romantic write, can myself feel the sparks when reading:)

Yas

[ImagineItAll]

Another poem by you that I love :-)

[knightcall]

A nice play on words with blush on the cheek. My that female dancer is mighty tall.
A heady wine is a nice phrase. Oh you schoolgirl you getting all giddy on us. Giggety giggety

[BrynnaW.]

I love how you just pour your heart out. It really is beautiful. Keep writing because it is a pleasure to read.

[FamaSemperVivat]

Once again you've penned a beautiful romantic tribute to true love.

[Inyourshadow]

sounds alot like how you met your fella at a party shy and unwilling to admit your feelings, this is beautiful and as always romance at it's finest. You always seem to know how to pen your heart, keep em' coming.