Is This Death?

A love poem

Where is my pulse?

My heart must have stopped

must be cardiac arrest

for you have stopped it beating.

Where are my respirations?

My breathing has stopped

can't take a breath

you made me forget to breathe.

Is this death?

If so it is the sweetest

for all I see and hear is you

never let me awaken....

you made my heart stop

you took my breath

you are my life...

Author's Note

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Reviews

[LadyKarissa]

If you can write romantic poetry. Now try to write romantic stories and novels. I am good at writing romantic/historical romance books and stories. I have been approached by a publishing agent in publishing my three series of historical romance books called Return To Misselthwaite Manor. I hope you get discovered too. Lucie

[Inyourshadow]

awww I love the romance of this piece the whole stopped heart and stolen breath is wonderful, you really pen the beauty of love. Keep em' coming

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Love it, a great love poem, words chosen are perfect in this poem:)

Yas