Anticipation

Anticipating a kiss

I remember when                                                                

a commercial way back then

showed ketchup slowly seeping

toward the entrance of the bottle

so very slowly that you wanted 

to reach your finger in and

help it come out quicker

causing your mouth to water

making the anticipation

of that taste so sweet.

Looking at you now

I feel that same feeling

gazing at those luscious lips

imagining their flavor as we kiss

how they would caress mine

soft at first and then

stronger and harder as 

passions rise and ignite

making the anticipation 

of that taste so sweet.

Reviews

[Raven Starhawk]

This has a sweet nectar to it. Every last drop is good and when the end comes there is no denying I want more.

[knightcall]

i think figure should be finger. But of course figures or fingers are never bad things. carly Simon sung the theme song, you're making me wait...........................

[ImagineItAll]

I love the feel of this poem! (and everything else that I have read by you) I especially love the beginning! What a great (and clever) way to start this passionate poem!

[WindSong]

Wow! Your poem is sizzling! Outstanding imagery and delivery!