Anticipation

Anticipating a kiss

I remember when                                                                

a commercial way back then

showed ketchup slowly seeping

toward the entrance of the bottle

so very slowly that you wanted 

to reach your finger in and

help it come out quicker

causing your mouth to water

making the anticipation

of that taste so sweet.

Looking at you now

I feel that same feeling

gazing at those luscious lips

imagining their flavor as we kiss

how they would caress mine

soft at first and then

stronger and harder as 

passions rise and ignite

making the anticipation 

of that taste so sweet.

Reviews

[Spade]

You took my thoughts of a boy I like, and put them on here word for word.

[from the desk of]

Yes, the anticipation of a kiss so wonderfully penned here, you should try writing some erotica it seems you have the talent for such, the imagery you use and the feel of your poems maybe something to think about. great job on this one.

[TJ]

I love the way you chose to express your anticipation! The picture you chose and the way you painted it was perfect

[Inyourshadow]

Me thinks there is more spice to be had in the kiss than in the sauce, the antiscipation of the taste is always an added factor. Love the sensual feel to the piece, keep em' coming

[OT]

oh yes a most sensual write! the ketchup - the red - the lips - great write!

[Poetic-Theorem]

Heinz me thinks :p Beautiful romantic delicious poetry , anticipation is great word! :D Sweet- Heat lovely imagery! Awesome work as always. *hug* David

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Such a lovely flow to this poem, love the romantic element to it, made me smile. Wonderful:)

[karmax]

Anticipation...one of life's finest rewards! Lovely penning :)

[kymee]

Perfectly awesome. I like the anticipation, the build up and the visual. Keep up the good work

[Daytonight]

Thanks for catching that error Thomas! I had my mind elsewhere at the moment. I have corrected it now. ^^
I do so hate to be kept waiting......
don't you?