Taking Flight

Taking Flight

A Poem by Daytonight
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Encouraging fellow AP poets

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Pushed like a young bird from its nest
trying to find a safe place to rest
adrift on wind's currents as I take flight
wondering do I veer left or veer right.

Spreading my wings and just letting go
floating aloft, soaring up high and down low
hoping to find a place to call home
where I can return if ever I roam.

Thankful for others who are in formation
as we search and scour for a new location
happy at last to find a place to rest
spending my time with AP's best.

© 2011 Daytonight


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as we are finding a place to write instead of AP which is sadly crumbling, it's awesome seeing so many familiar writers who are finding a home. I've written many about flight and we indeed can fly. this is an absolutely beautiful poem full of hope and an inspiration to those you have spent time with writing...that's a bond I pray lasts for a long time...thank you for sharing this beautiful poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Beautiful poetry, wonderful flow and rhyme, so happy you, me and many others from AP found a home to keep sharing our poetic voices. Thanks for sharing, and thanks for the smile your poem gave me. *hug* David

Posted 13 Years Ago


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The literary Watership Down, as we fly from the comfort we knew, great work my friend, nice rhyme and flow and the words well crafted, time will tell if we have landed safe.

john

Posted 13 Years Ago


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as we are finding a place to write instead of AP which is sadly crumbling, it's awesome seeing so many familiar writers who are finding a home. I've written many about flight and we indeed can fly. this is an absolutely beautiful poem full of hope and an inspiration to those you have spent time with writing...that's a bond I pray lasts for a long time...thank you for sharing this beautiful poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Superior in style. I deeply appreciate a poem such as this one. It harnesses absolute time and patience in order to create something as special as this!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Yep! Looks like a nice place to
call home, your right!!
Thanks for the smiles tonight!
I enjoyed reading this insightful
and delightful write!!
Hugs Easy

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Thanks Mystic and Karmax for your kind words. I do so long for that place where we as the best can continue to learn, write, and grow at our craft.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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You are a lovely indeed! This made me smile, to be part of a lovely group of AP peots is truly delightful (not to mention that those who are here are some of the very best people I've known throughout my life).
Well done!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Ah a poem that fits my desire's at best, finding a home to put my nest, to laymy pen and write with the best! Nicely done Day..and hit"s close to home for us Ap memebrs! Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed this great write !

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Daytonight
Daytonight

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I am a hopeless romantic who still believes in happily ever after. I have a passion for writing poetry. My poetry tends to be tender sensual love poetry with some heartbreak along the way. I also l.. more..

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