Brilliance Breaking

From an AP contest

Brilliance breaking, shining through

illuminating, making all things new

golden glowing, guiding the way

leading into a brighter day.

 

Cascading comfort, warmth all around

sunbeams dancing, floating to ground

like blessings flowing in the breeze

inspiring everyone who sees.

 

Hopes held high, lifting to heveanly skies

daring dreams with blissful sighs

ever encouraged and inspired

keep reaching out for goals desired.

 

Author's Note

Image from contest host on AP

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

Love the alliteration within these beautiful lines, Hopes held high, lifting to Heavenly skies ~ this is such an inspirational message piece and one that makes one feel good reading. Keep em' coming

[TJ]

wonderful piece! i loved the rhythm and perfect flow of this one! greatness! and the nice uplifting theme and your wordplay was top notch!
good work

[A little tipsy]

Beautiful poem Day with such a inspirational message to the reader. Nothing but possitive words in each line you penned. Leaves one ready to pick up pen and paper to create their own beauty.