Forget Me Not

Forget me not,

For I am yours,

You drifted away,

Like ashes,

Endlessly floating,

Colliding with each season,

Summer... winter...

Spring... and Autumn,

Withering slowly,

The earth sucking you in,

The cycle continues,

A life forms,

Then over time,

Turns to ash,

Just like you,

Forget me not,

You will forever be,

Apart of my soul,

Undying memories of you,

I weep,

Thinking, the world is a loss,

Without your gentle smile,

Without your tenderness,

Without your kindness,

Without your very soul living,

I loved every part of you,

This loss of mine tells me,

Just how much life can be very short,

Especially, now that you are gone.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[SleeplessVolcano]

Beautiful linking of the poem with the picture......your words describe a rawness which is authentic.....please continue your spontaneous style!

[Ti]

Thank you very much for taking the time to read it, I appreciate your kindness :)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Love this poem, and a lot of people can relate to this piece.

[kublakhan27]

A lot of heart and soul in this piece needless to say...this conjured up so many emotions for me...as I reflect on loved ones that I've lost, many before their time, I'm reminded of the struggle to retain the positive memories that I should be grateful for, as the heartache the sense of loss threaten to overtake my spirit...this piece could be an ode to any close relationship, and the feelings that follow in the wake of its end...the cycle does continue, for better or worse, but poems such as these are therapeutic in so many ways, and cathartic in others...it's hard to cite specific parts as favourites, for every line is so full of emotion and written so vividly, but as you can see just from what I've written here, this one certainly spoke to me on the deepest level, which is what great poetry does...very nicely done :)

[Ti]

I thank you, from the deepest part of my heart my friend.
Thank you, for such a deep thoughtful review, I'm glad you enjoyed reading it kublakhan.

[kublakhan27]

It's my pleasure :)

[❀Subaru_Nyaa!
..]

Apart of my soul = A part of my soul

what is the punishment if I forgot you? Will I get a pudding for it, if so, I will forget you.
I lost track of my thought again, I was suppose to write a formal review but you got this.....I don't know what the heck this is. It's good, it's sad...What do you expect me to say!? Why is my brain like this!!!????

[Ti]

Please calm down, try not to cause your head to explode full of confusion.
This poem is about the loss of someone dear, or a person close to you has gone far, far away out of your reach.
Thanks for the Apart=A part, I'll have to edit that ;)
And I have no idea what the punishment is for not remembering, if you want a punishment, god will punish you :p
Thank you for your review ;)

[Jackson H. Harley]

Love this one, one of my new favourites :) such sorrow written in such beautiful words :) great work :)

[Ti]

I'm glad this is one of your new faves Jackson :D
Thank you ;)

[An owl on the moon]

So much sorrowful longing... the aching... it overwhelms me... I can taste the bittersweet memories much too well...

[Ti]

How sweet of you to say this Craig, thank you, I really appreciate your thoughts and kindness :)
read moreHow sweet of you to say this Craig, thank you, I really appreciate your thoughts and kindness :)

[Dannyisawriter]

I really liked this because I can relate to it in some ways!!!

[Ti]

Thank you, it's great that you feel this way, I'm happy you can relate to it :)

[yuki]

You will forever be,
Apart of my soul,
Undying memories of you
this really speaks to me because memories of who you love never fade.good piece summer :)

[Ti]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it yuki! :D

[yuki]

my pleasure to read :)

[Frieda P]

I felt this one Summer, an eloquently effective read.

[Ti]

Thank you very much, glad you liked it Frieda :)