~Music Lover~

A woman's love for music drives her to a man, or just to the music itself?

I melt, loving and absorbing the melody,

Mellow and sweet,

I listen carefully, eyes closing,

My heart fluttering,

I breathe in the refreshing air,

Feeling the exquisite, floating music,

Surrounding me, so expressive this sound is,

Unconsciously, finding myself searching,

My hands moving, travelling to places unknown,

The music getting closer,

Like colours, clashing together,

Beautifully and precisely,

Carefree, caressing my ears,

Captivating me, I finally stop,

I've found my unavoidable sound,

The extroadinary saxophone, calling out to me,

Playing blissfully under the moonlit sky,

By the hands of a young man,

Talented and glorious, this man I have found,

I could hear this lovliness all day and night,

I'm sure he's a romantic,

Because at first sight,

I fell in love,

With his music tonight.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think :)

Reviews

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Interesting write, with beauty within.

[Ti]

Thankyou MadKat :)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your welcome.

[VandaQ]

Two words: Miles Davis. The poem greatly reminded me of the sublime artist he is and I thank you for making me want to listen to him hours and hours again.
Very sweet and illusion like your poem. Continue~ ^^
Best, Vanda.

[Ti]

Thank you very much, I appreciate you comment, I'm glad you enjoyed the read Vanda, thanks for your time. :)

[Bluefire]

This is beautiful and reminds me of Cassandra Clair's characters.
Most of her male characters play instruments like the piano or the violin.
This, also for some odd reason reminded me of The Great Gatsby. It has an old soul to it, I guess.
Anywho, well played! ^^

[Ti]

Oh wow. Without noticing, you know my personality already! :o
I'm very 'old soul', and I'm into vintage :D
You have the ability to know what personality people have! :o
That's amazing lol
Thank you for your review Bluefire ;)

[Bluefire]

Lol it was just a wild guess ^^
You're welcome

[Ti]

Well! What a good guess that was my friend. ;)

[Frieda P]

This is eloquently arousing and saxy! Love the sax myself, your poetry glided on the page, and hit all the right notes...

[Ti]

Those who do not take interest in the sax, probably - may not have romance or saxiness in them :pread moreThose who do not take interest in the sax, probably - may not have romance or saxiness in them :p
What a lovely comment, thank you very much! ;)
I'm glad you read it and had taken a liking to it.

[Frieda P]

Their loss, have you ever listened to Saxuality by Candy Dulfer, she plays a hot sax.

[Ti]

Really, I will have to listen!~~

[An owl on the moon]

Such a beautifully voiced sigh... soft music in each line that colors the canvas of your poetry... your heart... May you hear such music every day of your life...

[Ti]

I thank you for your kind words.
I hope you also find music, which reaches your soul, Craig.

[Josh Mattheu]

You make it seem so easy to incorporate imagery into your writing. If only I was talented enough to do that... Anyway awesome poem! :D

[Ti]

You are already very talented josh!
Delighted to hear from you, thank you for you review :)

[❀Subaru_Nyaa!
..]

I'LL TELL YOU WHAT I THINK ABOUT THIS!!! It was good but the girl did fell in love in the guy's music not him wouldn't that give her problems in the future? (I lost track again, Welcome to Subaru's brain 50% attention deficit and 50% mentally challenged) sorry

[Ti]

Haha, maybe it would :)
It's fine! Thank you for your review Subaryu ^•^

[Ti]

Awfully sorry, spelling your name wrong Subaru ;)

[❀Subaru_Nyaa!❀]

Don't worry,about it

[Jackson H. Harley]

Love the concept, not your typical love poem, awesome work :)

[Ti]

Thank you Jackson :)
Always nice to hear from you :)