Will this feeling of Love ever last?

Will this feeling of love ever last?

This confusion... this misery...

This heartache... This frustration...

Will it ever last?

I want it to leave, I want it to pass,

I want it to run, I want it to hide,

  I don't like this feeling or the embarrassment,

It's like this feeling is an undying harrassment.

It is too bold, too much to handle,

Too obvious for others to see,

This face of mine, a feverish-like blush,

Oh, I really hope he didn't see.

I want to hide myself away,

  Before this unrequited love blossoms even more,

To a mere crush, to a strong unbeatable love,

To an obsessiveness of his attractiveness,

 his personality, his touch,

I need to stop before I forcefully take them all,

  Will this feeling of love ever last?

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think :)

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

For a sixteen year old this is a very well developed poem of passion and obsession written in a flowing piece of free verse.

[Ti]

Thank you John, it's an honour to have you review a piece of work of mine :)
I'm glad you liked it, I will gladly keep reading through your works because of how good a writer you are :)

[will19008]

Lots of energy and angst, it really evokes the rush of joy and confusion experienced when encountering new love... btw, try 'confusion' instead of 'confusement'... Nice work!

[Ti]

Thank you! :)
Will do, thanks for suggestion, i'll make sure to fix that :)

[Jackson H. Harley]

Very sweet poem, great choice of words portraying very familiar emotions, love it :)

[Ti]

Thank you so much! Sorry I'm only getting back to you today :)
Thank you for your 'sweet' compliments, I'm glad you liked it ^.^

[Jackson H. Harley]

Your welcome :)

[yuki]

awww very cute poem I like this a lot :)

[Ti]

Thank you very much Yuki-chan ~

[yuki]

Your welcome senpai :)