Pleasure Principle

A Freudian Sequel

 

 

 

 

 

 

You come from the distant horizons,

A stranger to the mind in the inception,

But you brought a curious joy of touch.

The self, deprived in its sensation of duality,

Craved for that pleasure and beatitude.

You brought us to it, by your demeanor,

From the boorish to the celebrated response.

How we entwined together, bodies like sponge,

That Winthrop, the horse, took to nurturing.

Nature, in all its glory sprang forth in love,

An adoration of itself in times to come.

The Adonai rises from its cradle in the body,

Itself, the  illuminati in the ego, for the mind,

The way the mind likes to perceive itself,

With the voices of the mists in the forests.

Hail to thee, joy and pleasure of the body,

Thou art then and now the true mind of man.

 

Reviews

[Bhargavi]

ur work is intriguing.. I cant really connect with ur thot but surely it sounds geat..I wish i cud understand it more..

[Kruppz]

I find maintain similar structure in all of your poems- something I truly look up to. I think it reflects your self-confidence & that you've reached a point of certainty in your life. Certainty about what life is, what life should be- of what you want from life. And I think your poem is by far one of my favorite literary descriptions of sex. One of the best I ever read on writerscafe.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Wow. This is pure intellectual stimulation. Something I am not used to.