Stumbling

For submission to Tovli's Ten words

Stumbling

 

 

A hobo is a part

Like history spoken in past tense

In a universe that began with a worm

Cooked without oil

In an iron skillet

Baked bread and was fine-dined

But stumbles as he speaks

And we ask ... why?

Reviews

[Tovli]

I like the "tease" of the poem and the flow. It has a didactic message, yet is playful. nice job.

[Helen Crutchett]

LOL....I'm loving all the different "takes" on the 10/40 words!

"A worm cooked without oil! " OMG.....so funny! Thanks for submitting this to Tovli's contest!