Sweet Missus

Give your all to the one you love, but how much is to much. The struggle of a man and his Missus.

You yell and shriek by the sounds of hours.

Why do you stay in this house of ours.

The clock hits three,

you scream and cry, slowly moving.. towards me.

Bones creaking and joints out of place,

You crawl from the darkest of space.

The lights they flicker,

My voice, courage and hope all wither.

Your grin hides your terrifying guile,

I know its not friendly, its a murderous smile.

Your voice is alluring, why is that so!

How you always get so close, I never seem to know.

Your body is heavy, your will is strong.

Opening my mouth and hiding inside, it feels so wrong.

Controlling my body with your insane desires.

Your hunger burns hotter than hell's fires!

I won't listen, get out of my head! 

Allow me once again to lay in this bed.

Gripping so tightly with no feelings of remorse,

Your holding my throat with such force.

Hardly breathing, oxygen deprived.

I guess that's it, my times arrived.

No bad thoughts or hateful wishes,

As long as your happy, that's fine by me.

Goodnight, my sweet Missus.

Author's Note

Lemme know what you think in a comment of message please. And much appreciated.

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

This is reminds me of a story you would hear about on dateline.

He really has given too much to his Missus. This is creepy and twisted but I get the idea of giving all u have and it still isn't enough.

[A.marie.speaks]

The greatest kind of creepy. I love how you blur the lines before reality and nightmare. The couplets realy work well and flow nicely. Really enjoyed reading this one.

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

powerful, amazing, beautiful, very powerful

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful description brought to life wild life and places.
"Your body is heavy, your hair is strong.
Opening my mouth and hiding inside, it feels so wrong."
The above lines were my favorite. They felt alive and true. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Insight "MH"]

A man and his women need tolerance in their lives, cause people aren't perfect and their personalities are incomplete without each other. A relationship must have its ups and downs cause that's life, but what makes all this stabilise is a relationship based on true love and that what has been done in the last part, nicely written.