Young and Mature

A meeting; my first poem that I actually spent time on. It is meant to be read by two people.

 

Brown on black on skin

This is what my spirit fasted for

Dark coils with lightning crackling

My nails black to be entangled

Soft doe eyes concentric with black

Where will this take us?

Sighs and jerky movements

My heart is starved

Clean hands full of hard work

I feel my own hands clench

An out of place callus on the right thumb

My eyes go wide with worry

A voice full of play

The smile that sweeps across my face

A handshake or two

                                                                       A hug with a hand coming back wet

Disappearance

                                         We will meet again

Reviews

[Ruby Moon]

interesting format
i am assuming that its meant to be two different people therefore the two sides?
left and right?
its almost like you want each of the sides to be able to be read alone
and also together...
like two strings interwine...
then the last sentence a knot to hold them together...
but then i might be wrong