Mind Games

It's a surprise!

 

His eyes deep brown, hair black silk

 

     BREATHTAKING…sigh

 

His fingers caressing the French linen table cover

     

         Mmm…SEXY

 

My heart mounted wings, my soul took flight

 

             I’m…SOARING

 

What was he thinking? This mysterious man

 

      Helplessly…ENRAPTURED

 

Perhaps it was the intrigue in his eyes

 

             Like magic…ALLURING

 

The language his body seemed to speak

 

           TAUNTING…me

 

In any case, I quickly grabbed the last hot roll!

 

           Yeah baby!...SIZZLING

 

One can never be sure of the thoughts lurking

    within the chambers a famished mind…

 

             Mmm…

                    Pass the butter, Please!

Author's Note

I love the art of creating an illusion, only to leave the reader shaking their head at the finish line! Besides, I'm a double entendre junkie! I hope you enjoy your roll!

Reviews

[Beka]

Brilliant.
I totally LOL'd in class
My teacher gave me a death stare then read it.
Found it funny.
Whole class read it.
Some didn't get it.
Idiots.
Anyway I love it.
I was completely expecting something.
Way to take advantage of the fith that the human mind has become so open about.
^_^

[moosicphreak]

i like the capslock punctuation statement after each image.

[Broken.]

Haha! Great work.
I love it.

[lilain]

Mm, warm bread. I like this. Very playful!

Nice job!

Cheers,
lilain

[Melissa]

I love this one, the way it plays with the reader. The capitalized words almost create a poem on their own!

[William B. Burkholder]

oh my gosh cracked me up LMao

[Your Tasty Field Adviso..]

its a great poem, full of love and longing. i really like it.

[Tara Jean Olson]

i am impressed. it is different, and you pulled it off, nicely