Mind Games

It's a surprise!

 

His eyes deep brown, hair black silk

 

     BREATHTAKING…sigh

 

His fingers caressing the French linen table cover

     

         Mmm…SEXY

 

My heart mounted wings, my soul took flight

 

             I’m…SOARING

 

What was he thinking? This mysterious man

 

      Helplessly…ENRAPTURED

 

Perhaps it was the intrigue in his eyes

 

             Like magic…ALLURING

 

The language his body seemed to speak

 

           TAUNTING…me

 

In any case, I quickly grabbed the last hot roll!

 

           Yeah baby!...SIZZLING

 

One can never be sure of the thoughts lurking

    within the chambers a famished mind…

 

             Mmm…

                    Pass the butter, Please!

Author's Note

I love the art of creating an illusion, only to leave the reader shaking their head at the finish line! Besides, I'm a double entendre junkie! I hope you enjoy your roll!

Reviews

[Beka]

Brilliant.
I totally LOL'd in class
My teacher gave me a death stare then read it.
Found it funny.
Whole class read it.
Some didn't get it.
Idiots.
Anyway I love it.
I was completely expecting something.
Way to take advantage of the fith that the human mind has become so open about.
^_^

[A Word]

I love the fact that she was anticipating the last roll. I really didn't know what to expect. I didn't assume what you were thinking or what you were going to say. One of the great things about reading someone else's work is that they are not you. It wouldn't make sense to assume that you are thinking what I am thinking - you know?

[just_me]

Now all I can think about is crisp linen, warm buns, and sweet, salty...butter.


Very nice Prose!

[Flow]

I was thinking... never mind.. this was truly wonderful to read, being a fly inside the brain listening to your thoughts.. mmm how wonderful is that? extremely I say. Loved this write

[Jessica Benfield]

lol this is too funny! lol i liked the italisized words between the stanzas, added mystery and allurment to he poem. i loved the "mind games" in this - one was expecting somehting of a romantic ending, but you have uniquly morphed it into a whole new, surprising twist - and it works well! amazing write!
smiles,
jess

[Midnight Rose ~*Anna Ro..]

I was expecting something else, but I was still blown away by the write. I liked the adding of the words in between each stanza. This was a cute playful read, I enjoyed this piece. Great write.

[J. James Reider]

You perfectly described what could have been a showdown at high noon (upon second reading). yes my filthy mind went dirty the first time (: but overall I loved the twist at the end... and the journey you took us on to get there was magnificent!

[wizthom]

my love i would have gave you the last roll, cause i sense my essence flowing toward you like butter on a hot bisquit peace wizthom :-0

[Jadey]

LOL too cute I really like the mysteriousness then bam you got that one last hot roll.

[Twinschoice]

I am so impressed with your writing, even though we are very different in our style. This one, Mind Game, was one of my favorites! Very nice...and actually, it made me giggle.