Mind Games

It's a surprise!

 

His eyes deep brown, hair black silk

 

     BREATHTAKING…sigh

 

His fingers caressing the French linen table cover

     

         Mmm…SEXY

 

My heart mounted wings, my soul took flight

 

             I’m…SOARING

 

What was he thinking? This mysterious man

 

      Helplessly…ENRAPTURED

 

Perhaps it was the intrigue in his eyes

 

             Like magic…ALLURING

 

The language his body seemed to speak

 

           TAUNTING…me

 

In any case, I quickly grabbed the last hot roll!

 

           Yeah baby!...SIZZLING

 

One can never be sure of the thoughts lurking

    within the chambers a famished mind…

 

             Mmm…

                    Pass the butter, Please!

Author's Note

I love the art of creating an illusion, only to leave the reader shaking their head at the finish line! Besides, I'm a double entendre junkie! I hope you enjoy your roll!

Reviews

[Beka]

Brilliant.
I totally LOL'd in class
My teacher gave me a death stare then read it.
Found it funny.
Whole class read it.
Some didn't get it.
Idiots.
Anyway I love it.
I was completely expecting something.
Way to take advantage of the fith that the human mind has become so open about.
^_^

[Tonya]

I love this!! It is so sexy, yet surprising. The imagery is very clear,yet disguising!!

Nicely Done!!

[Kelly Scheppers]

My haste in getting to "the roll" was a clever ploy, planted by a clever mind! Nicely done!

I would prefer the sweetness of Orange Marmalade, to the softness of butter, thank you!

My best,
Kelly

[DrumMajorPod]

Yay! That started out really *gasp* but then it turned really *yay!*. Well.. ok, so I can word it better than that. It seemed to be so serious at first (my mind screamed, "Vampires?!"). Then, at the ending, I smiled because it was really cute. You're so very talented. Mmmm. I can almost smell it... mmmmm. Your imagery is... astounding. Amazing. Captivating. =] GREAT JOB!!

[AubreyJade]

Love it. I like the way you incorporated the describing words.....and then surprise everyone at the end! Definately pass the butter....=>

[Rhine Wolf]

Hot rolls and soft Butter! Mmmmmm brilliant!

[M_S_Lay]

That was fun...I always loved the double entendre myself. And it something you seem to have a great handle on.

Well done

[Not Named]

That was great! It's definately the best I have read today! Perfect! haha!

[Jarrai]

Yeah, that was awesome. I liked the rhythm too.

[Andrea A. Wentz]

haha cute, wasn't expecting that :) I like it! Nice twist at the end. "Taunting" was a little out of what was expected as well. hehe yeah I like it :)

[Mark Pearce]

Nice finish.

I like works with a payoff.

This has it.