NeverLand

The real meaning of romance

You beat me with your leather belt
How hard and unimaginable it felt
I tried to cover my back
You threw my bloody hands away and started to attack
I rolled off the red bed
That was I when i tried to fake death
You ran out the room to go get mom
I grabbed the near by knife with my bloody palm
You came back into the room
I heard sighs
did You really thing I was going to die?
You turned around to get the phone
You turned back around and I was gone
I snuck up and behind you and stabbed like hell
The knife was in your neck, you screamed while you fell
I walked out of my house, took all that I wanted
Heaven or Hell I will be haunted

Author's Note

ignore anything that's wrong XD

Reviews

[Alana McGuire]

Ooooh this is epicly intense. ;)

[Emm'here]

Amazing. I love the intensity and emotion put into this. The font suits it well ^.^

[The XYZ Writer]

Quite dark writing indeed. But so very descriptive and fast-paced. Made me want to keep reading it.

[Sourav]

Well, it's violent for sure but enjoyed the way you've described the whole drama. It's good to read. :)

[paradise]

Kinna disturbing but Iike the idea of it and the story part odf it nice choice of color :) I loved the detail though

[Walk away slow poet]

WOW, so very disturbing indeed, I really liked all the feeling you put into this write. You did a wonderful job with detail.

[tanaya]

Wow... This is amazong! The way you wrote everything is amazing! The story is slightly disturbing but I like it that way XD Could you please read my peoms? You might be interested in them... Love it!

[makayla]

OMG... Amazing writing!... very true... lots of emotion! very strong writing!

[Sucker Punch]

Loved it Cameron!

[emma]

dark, that's for sure. but i liked it.