MorningEvening

Vampire newborn life

The bite was hard and violent
My blood now full of venom
My teeth pure white and sharp
My velocity will never stops
My strength so strong and safe
My eyes the color of blood
The mud on my feet
The wind in my hair
The evil looks and hatred
and the ugly looks and stares
It like a new life of Earth
But the Earth hasn't yet populated vampires,
Not Just yet...

Author's Note

ignore anything wrong XD

Reviews

[Alana McGuire]

I love how it made me feel like I was there to see it all. :)

[paradise]

I love this vampires nice i like the flow nice poem

[Walk away slow poet]

Very nicely written, like the color chosen.

[tanaya]

Awesome poem! I love it! Great work!

[Sucker Punch]

Great write!