Mistaken

Mistaken

A Poem by Dandelion

I know I'm alive 
but I feel like I've died.

It's sort of like a dream
when nothing is as it seems.

He turned is back
without knowing the facts
 
of what had occurred.
It was completely absurd.

He did not want me around
so is footsteps became
the only sound.

© 2013 Dandelion


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What a way to have mistaken what's significantly precious from the get go. A selfish blinded eye cannot see the true value within a real relationship. His loss will become someone else's gain. What a pity to be truly mistaken in this situation. Great write. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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What a way to have mistaken what's significantly precious from the get go. A selfish blinded eye cannot see the true value within a real relationship. His loss will become someone else's gain. What a pity to be truly mistaken in this situation. Great write. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Dandelion
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Pensacola, FL



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