Grandmother

I wrote this for my mom from my 8 month old son's point of view for mothers day.

You're not my mother but might as well be.
You love and play with me just as much as she.
Even though this day you should rest,
I'm still very young to careless.I wont drive you up the wall, like your daughter.
I wont talk mechanics, like her father.
I'll smile real wide and let out a fart
but I promise grandma it comes from the heart.

Reviews

[uhknowbot-e]

it was really nice. kinda lost me a little on that long line. but i realized it was a new one and was cool again lol

[B-poet]

A very nice way to pay homage to your Grandmother. Nice write. :)

[Stevvy Hopson]

D'awww >____<
That's too freaking cute.