Pitiful disaster

Every time she looks in the mirror,
she cries.
To see what has become of her
is just too much to bare.
The horrible memories are carved
into her mind and the
scar on her heart
shows in her eyes.
Just look at her,
don't you see
how much pain she is in?
Help her
before
she helps herself.

Reviews

[CriticalxxAngel]

I really enjoyed this poem I think you have so much real feeling in a few words. The poem lingers for some time making you think. Great Job!