Stand in the rain

When the rain pours down
go outside and settle down
in the grass.

The feeling of relief, and the
sorrow flood through your pores
is wonderful.

Stand in the rain
when everything is crashing down
and when life becomes suffocating.

Stand in the rain
when you feel everyone is against you
and nothing seems right.

Stand in the rain
when you feel like you're going to fall
because the glorious rain will hide it.

Reviews

[Yasmin]

This is a lovely poem. I can't help but to agree with you standing in the rain is the most wonderful thing of all.
You have done a good job on the rhyme.
My favorite part is
"The feeling of relief, and the
sorrow flood through your pores
is wonderful."
Well done :)

[Dandelion]

Thank you