Leave me here

Broken seals,
unheard yells.,
choked down pills,
stabbed by nails.
Torn apart.
I don't know love.
Swollen heart,
you're not from above.
Pain inside me,
a million tears.
You have the key
to all my fears.
I'm hurt enough,
leave me be.
I'm not that tough,
I don't want you to see.

Reviews

[Steve]

You capture these feelings well...i enjoyed this.

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Is't written by ya .....!! well, what should i've to say to ya......very powerful words if a say.....you too know tha worth of it no doubt.....liked it..........even i liked + loved = enjoyed.....loved here few much lines.....

I don't know love.
Swollen heart,
you're not from above.
Pain inside me,
a million tears.........there's so depth in yer words i've seen........i think it comes from yer real life...?....?
beautiful piece.......!!

[Vikram S. Mathur]

Very nice. Honestly liked it.

[The Nude Writer]

Your poetry has so much raw emotion. Quite beautiful really.