iI Never Felt Such Emptyness!!!!!!!!!!

I never felt such emptyness

So ravaged, ruined, lost!

Ah! My love, we found our love,

But see what it will cost????

 

 

We met on the inter net

And fell in love through fait

singing lovely  thoughts as if

we were destined as a soul mate

 

 

from miles you came to tee me

and tenderly touched my flesh

mu soul sang beautifuly

Our hearts a perfect mesh.

 

 

But alas you could not  not stay

Your job forced you back home

and I could not go with you

Once again I am alone.

 

 

 

My daughters father won;t agree

to move our precious dove

So now i'm forced to choose between

my daughter and our love.

 

 

So cruel a choice & sacrifice to make

and so I dyingly remain

seperate from my hearts true love

and forever  bare this pain.

 

 

Reviews

[Aspiring Angel]

It seems my new friend that you have had some pretty tough decissions to make as of late. A beautiful rendering of the emotions of your heart. I hope that things will come to a happy solution. Very nicely done. I will look forward to reading more of your work.

Hugs,
Lesa

[just is]

Wow! Such a decession this is painful
And devasting to have to chose
Sad write but expressed with emotion well.

[Wondering Mind]

A sad write, telling a tale not so uncommon these days. I pray that the miles between you diminish as the days come and go.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Such a sad write. Beautifully penned. Thank you for sharing. Debileah