Why Can't I talk To You?????

This was about my mother... I always talked to her about everything and told her about my illness well she slammed the door in my face and told me she didn't want to hear about it anymore not anything i wanted to say. She was the only one I had I was sca

                                      Why can’t I talk to you?                                                           
Current mood: disappointed                                                                                                                     

Fighting fighting just fighting to show

what it is that my soul and body already know.

 

Somethings wrong, people theres something wrong!!!!!

Yeah yeah, same ol' dance same ol' song

 

No No No your mind just runs wild

Stop i dont want to hear it your acting like a child!

 

My very bones feel crushed always in pain

I have no one nothing but denial to gain

 

Whats going on? you've always been there before!?!

I'm talking to you, don't slam your door!!!!

 

I'm alone with this daily pain i feel

talking to you guys about it helps me deal!

 

I sleep, breath, drink this hell

I wish I could shed this evil shell!!!

 

No one wants to hear or know whats true

Just needing them here like they used to.

 

With all the disease and pain, alone I learn to cope

So don't talk down to me or treat me like a f*****g dope!

 

You will see when the tests come in

dont worry though I wont come to you ever again!

Reviews

[Heath Payton]

Thats the one I was waiting for! This says it all. Get it out, true emotion. But at the end of the day you know who you can talk to. The one that has been there from the start. The one that is EAGER to learn and wants to be the shoulder to cry on.
I love this one more than the rest because you did not hold back. It is spot on to a "T"
Bute when times are hard, you knoe you can run to me. :)
Great piece!!!!

[Tas]

I honestly felt your pain, great write, and sorry you had to go through that, thanks for entering.