I will Always be with you

This was written when I first found out I had a brain tumor and Chiari malformation and syringomyelia. I thought well.... This is it for me because i was swelling up couldn't walk seizers that knocked me out waking up not knowing what the heck had happen

 

 

 

Surgery after surgery tough through it all,

my tired body has had enough and now ready to fall.



Never being angry at God for making me an example,

always knowing he'll give me nothing more than which i can handle.



But now i live with an eternal disease,

my broken down body never at ease.



For those that resent me and wish me gone,

do your dance and have your victory song.



But for those who love me me dear,

always know i will always be near.



Because up in heaven my peace awaits,

hopefully my chance to see the pearly gates.



Please dont be sad or cry ,

for everyone's destiny is to die.



I will happy and without pain,

all the joy and riches i hope to gain.



I love you all with all my heart,

trust in this we will never truely be apart.

                                      

 

I WILL ALWAYS BE WITH YOU                                                                                                                     

                                                                             

Reviews

[Nathan Strange]

Hey this is good, now I understand where your heart is, some times it take just a flick of a switch to turn our hearts on and bring us alive. I'm sure now you're cured you're twice as strong as you was, and you can write poetry... AMAZING... I feel this poem, it was truly heart felt it couldn't have been realer, cheers, you've lightened up my day!! INSPIRING!

[Sean M. Addams]

very heart felt and written with lots of beautiful imagery

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Wonderful writing. so sad and heartfelt also very strong..
Chloe
xoxo

[R J Askew]

straight from the heart. didn't put a word wrong. how could anyone not be moved by this.

[Gandré]

Heart wrenching....wonderful and i believe it will long be remembered by me....
love you all with all my heart,

trust in this we will never truely be apart. ---such a wonderful insight!

[Shinis]

Be hopeful as ever.. For it is the only striving strength one can live with.
All the very best!! And continue to write as well as this.

[Angie- Reading As Fast ..]

This is so full of emotion and positive reflection even in a dark time. This is beautifully written and heart-wrenching. My prayers are with you.

[Fantasyfairy]

A beautiful emotional piece. Well written, great flow and structure. It's a shame you had to go through such pain to discover the strength within yourself. I am so glad you are now healthy, well done hun, such a heart-felt, tear jerker. XX

[Stacy A. Foster]

This was heartbreaking to read, especially this part:

For those that resent me and wish me gone,
do your dance and have your victory song.

There are a few people that I don't care for that much, but I would never wish an illness or death on them. Hard to believe some people could be so very cruel. I hope that the people touching your life are positive and supportive.

I'm glad that this was written years ago and not recently. I hope your health stays perfect.
This writing is hopeful, peaceful, and blunt at the same time.

Very nice. :)

[Serendipity]

Congratulations for your health. It is true that God only gives you what you can endure. And this poem is simple, yet beautiful. Its meaning touches the heart.

[I Quit The Cafe For Awh..]

What an amazing write. I'm so happy to hear your cancer is gone. Your writing shows you were really strong and can write about it beautifully. Your a great person and I mean that. I look forward to getting to know you better. So many of us on this site are inspired to tell about ourselves and our struggles because you do that. You inspire people. You write so well, if you haven't been published I think now is the time. Remember I am brand new to this site so I couldn't have told you that sooner.