This was written when I first found out I had a brain tumor and Chiari malformation and syringomyelia. I thought well.... This is it for me because i was swelling up couldn't walk seizers that knocked me out waking up not knowing what the heck had happen
Surgery after surgery tough through it all,
my tired body has had enough and now ready to fall.
Never being angry at God for making me an example,
always knowing he'll give me nothing more than which i can handle.
Hey this is good, now I understand where your heart is, some times it take just a flick of a switch to turn our hearts on and bring us alive. I'm sure now you're cured you're twice as strong as you was, and you can write poetry... AMAZING... I feel this poem, it was truly heart felt it couldn't have been realer, cheers, you've lightened up my day!! INSPIRING!
Such glorious words of true faith in yourself and the lord and understanding that life isn't always a bed of roses but with love in your heart everything else will fall into place... very inspirational write.
I admire you and your beautiful poem, have tear running down my checks as I read it. You are a very strong and courageous woman. I have an incurable disease and have found it hard to deal with at times, but after reading your poem. I think I have found more strength and courage to do so, thank you! Your write is very inspiring, it has made me realise that instead of complaining about my disease I need to embrace it and learn to live with it. God has a reason for everything and I shouldn't question as to "Why"...again "thank you" You will always be in my thoughts and prayers. I appreciate you, and all you have done to make my life so much brighter by reading your words. God Bless, P.W.
This and your biography tugged at my heart strings. I am at a loss for words. People take life for granted. I admire you for your poetry and your optimistic out look on life. May God bless you and your lovely daughter. You will be in my prayers.
This is eloquent, tragic, sad and beautiful! I could use many words to describe what this poem made me feel, but I'll simply say that it is amazing! It inspires faith and hope....you seem like a very strong and positive person. Kudos for writing such a powerful piece!
I can already see this written in your tombstone. A letter to all. Full of emotions, high on suspense ( we dont know what is that you are suffering from), and gets ambiguous towards the end with the line " i will be happy without pain". It made me think can anyone know joy without pain. Nice effort. drop in to my side sometimes.
Lovely poem...truly lovely :)
It not only reflects your pain within, but at the same time, gives an insight of how brave your heart is, and how strong it can be for the ones dear to you :))))
Wow, i would be lying, if after having read that i said that i didn't have a few tears stumble down my cheek. I could try to say I understand but that wouldn't be fair. I love this bit of work, and i can Semi relate having dealt with much pain and death in my own life.
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