First Foot

First Foot

A Poem by David Lewis Paget

Two small brown pennies were thrust in his hand,

Some bread, and a lump of coal,

Our Mam had added a sprinkle of salt

‘For luck,’ she said, and his soul.

‘The Devil is waiting for you out there,’

She laughed, and shivered for real,

‘You have to be gone when the clock strikes twelve!’

She let out a little squeal!

 

It was ninety-nine; it was New Year’s Eve,

Victoria sat on the throne,

Our house a terrace on Coal-Pit Street,

It was cold and damp, but home.

Our Da had gone as the miners go

Under a fall of coal,

His body was left where it fell that day

They closed off the tunnel wall.

 

He left a couple of likely lads

That’s Joe, and me, right here,

But Joe was the eldest, quite thirteen,

And he with the blackest hair,

The bevy of girls just giggled that night

First foot was always a man,

(It was in the Wales that we knew back then

When the nightmare first began!)

 

We pushed him out when the clock began

To strike the midnight hour,

The last of the eighteen hundreds, and

We slammed the wooden door,

A lightning bolt gave a mighty flash,

The rain turned into hail,

While the clock, it chimed the first of twelve

Behind the mantle rail.

 

The thunder rumbled overhead

It brought us to our knees,

The girls cried out to their mother then,

But she cried out to me,

The door exploded in splinter-shards

A lightning hit, outside,

I rushed through the shattered opening…

Thinking that Joe had died!

 

The kerb was black and burnt, and all

The street lamps, they were out,

Pieces of tile and chimney pot

Were scattered, round and about,

But Joe, there was no sign of him,

No coins, no bread, no coal,

It was almost as if the Devil came

And swallowed my brother whole!

 

The police came round the following day

And said: ‘It’s very strange!

Maybe you scared your brother,

Maybe he upped and ran away?’

For weeks we searched the neighbourhood

Our Mam, she went quite mad,

Hanging on coats of strangers;

She was locked away, it’s sad!’

 

That was the last First Foot for me

I’d never answer the door,

If anyone knocked at midnight

I would yell: ‘What you knockin’ for?’

My kids were told, ‘don’t answer it,

The Devil’s in the wind!’

And I’d wonder about poor Joseph,

Was he sinner, or was he sinned?

 

In the old year, 1949

A New Year came again,

Full fifty years since my brother Joe

Went missing in the rain,

My kids were grown, were rowdy

And sat up, most playing games,

When a knock at the door at midnight

Came in the midst of ‘Auld Lang Syne.’

 

My lad, Evan, had answered it

Before he thought, he said,

A lad was on the kerb, with coins and coal,

Some mouldy bread!

‘He had some madness look in his eye,

Stood underneath the light,

I would have let him come in, first foot,

Except that his hair was white!’

 

David Lewis Paget

© 2012 David Lewis Paget


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A Victorian poem; i.e. a poem that would be going the pub rounds in working class areas in the Victorian age.
It is a pity that the the tradition of the first-foot is dying out: forced out by municipally organised street parties for tourists.
ATB
Alex.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Magyk, tragedy and the inevitable question as to the grief or rewards in such an experience of life's curiosities. Where we are unable to answer it clearly, we eventually learn to close a door or two, edit the liberal nature and take to something else. We'll be back another day. Nice write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow! this is so amazing ! kept me wondering the whole time ...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Like he stepped through a time warp I think. Excellent, scary piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lovely. i love the language you use in this. it's beautiful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Excellent...I love how your tales play out, just like singing a song..The tempo is great, and the story line awesome..

I feel the influence of Banjo here, and in your others, and that is a wonderful thing..

Thank you for the poem, and thank you, Tate for sending me here.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A fun tale for sure...it has a great rhythm.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

reading your work is better than a movie and better than a time machine. You put the reader right there alongside whatever is happening and each character is well known from the start. Magic, pure magic and all done with a little salt.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

One day I THINK YOU MAY RIDE THAT LIGHTNING BOLT OF SIN RIGHT OUT OF HERE LOL

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OH YEAH!!!!
As always the tale twists and turns and comes back at you. I cant seem to ever get enough of these twisted tales of yours.Bravo on this one .
Tate

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Just like you to send shivers down my spine for the new year. Fantastic poem, my reincarnated Poe, and a quality start to another year. Excellent story!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on January 1, 2012
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Tags: Wales, coal, miner, coins

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David Lewis Paget
David Lewis Paget

Moonta, South Australia, Australia



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