Lost August

‘Oh, it’s not that I want to be awkward,’

She began, as he stifled a sigh,

‘Though I don’t understand your intentions,

And I’m not even going to try…’

‘I will bow to your final decision,’ he said,

In this, as in all we have done,

Only, please try to show me some kindness

As the man you once loved for your own.’

 

She looked from the living room window

Her arms tightly crossed at the breast,

Her back was so sternly toward him

That he feared for the worst, (and the best),

‘There once was a time,’ then she halted,

Some things were left better unsaid,

Then she sighed, ‘Well, it’s just for one Christmas...

Then she snarled, ‘But I wish you were dead.’

 

And he smiled, as she turned back to face him

In that wistful expression of old,

Where his mouth turned the corners up lightly

But his eyes cried their hurt in the cold.

‘Yes, it’s only for Christmas I’m asking

With our children again at the last,

I’ll be gone with the wind in the morning,

Just a memory drift in your past.’

 

Then he felt that he should have said something

So he muttered: ‘I’m sorry… and that’,

And he turned down his gaze to the carpet,

And he felt for his old, beaten hat.

‘Don’t go... would you care for a coffee...’

She haltingly started to say,

As he fumbled his hat in confusion

To nod his familiar way.

 

‘If you’d rather I went,’ he said quickly,

‘I know this is painful for you....’

‘Don't be soft,’ said his wife from the kitchen,

‘It’s long since I felt owt for you...’

‘If you’d only been more of a husband,

Or more of a father to them...’

‘Yes, I know,’ and he painfully nodded,

And stared at the carpet again.

 

‘Well, you’ll sleep on the floor, in the study,

And I don't want you wandering round,

I’ve a man, as you know, that I sleep with,

And I won’t have him feeling put down.’

Then the hurt of his glance must have touched her,

‘Well, I’m sorry, but that’s how it is,

Either sleep in the study…’ he nodded,

And accepted with grace his defeat.

 

‘As a matter of interest’, she started,

As she carried the tray through the door,

‘Where on earth did you go... back in August

(He just smiled at some point on the floor).

‘Was it some fancy woman you wanted

While I spent the nights sitting alone,

Spent the days in a panic, and staring

In the hopes that you’d write, or you’d phone?’

 

‘I’m sorry,’ he muttered, ‘I’m sorry,

I know it was terribly wrong...

As he sat huddled up in the corner,

(And he’d once been so straight and so strong),

So strong and so young and romantic,

So faithful as well... she appeared

Once again in the line of his vision

With the slightest veiled hint of a sneer.

 

‘I’ll be off then, I’ll see you on Sunday,’

Then he rushed through the door and was gone

And the tears welled again at her eyelids

As she felt so adrift and alone.

‘What is done has been done and forgotten,

I’m soft for the beggar, I know.’

Then the children rushed in at the doorway...

‘Was that Daddy we saw up the road?’

 

On the night before Christmas, a shadow

Slid wearily up to the door,

And the head was both bowed and defeated,

And the coat was both ragged and torn,

But she hid the distaste as she took it

And noticed how aged he’d become,

As he went to the study in silence,

And she went to her bed with her man.

 

He emerged at the break of the dawning

Midst the cries of delight at the tree,

And he basked in their love and attention

As he balanced them both on his knee.

But his wife was a trifle distracted

For her man wouldn't come, at the last,

‘I’ll be gone with the wind...’ he repeated,

‘Just a memory drift in your past.’

 

And he’d gone as he’d promised, when morning

Saw all the festivities done,

With the love and regrets of his children

And a last, loving kiss for his son...

‘Yes it’s only for Christmas I’m asking

With our children again at the last,’

He was gone with the wind in the morning,

Just a memory drift in her past.

 

But the New Year was carelessly breaking

And the memories slipping away

When the police brought the news in the morning

That he’d died on the previous day.

‘Do you mean that he’d kept it a secret,

I’ll be damned,’ said the Sergeant again,

‘He knew he was riddled with cancer,

What a man, what a man among men!’

 

So she cried… but it wasn’t in anger,

Just the soft, helpless cry of defeat...

Did he think it would be any better,

Did he think he could temper her grief?

‘As a matter of interest,’ she’d started

As she’d carried the tray through the door,

‘Where on earth did you go back in August...

He’d just smiled at a point on the floor.

 

Now whenever she passes her lover

They both turn their faces away,

He went back to his job in munitions

And his wife, it was better that way...

If he’d only been more of a husband,

Or more of a father, she’d said,

And she’d sighed, ‘Well it’s just for one Christmas...’

And she’d snarled, ‘But I wish you were dead!’

 

And he’d smiled as she’d turned back to face him

In that wistful expression of old,

Where his mouth turned the corners up lightly

But his eyes cried their hurt in the cold.

‘Yes, it’s only for Christmas I’m asking

With our children again, at the last,

I’ll be gone with the wind in the morning,

Just a memory drift in your past.’

 

David Lewis Paget

Reviews

[Bubo]

I have a lump in my throat the size of an apple. I was rivited from start to finish..........and of course
knowing he had died, been ill, and stayed away made it so heart breaking.
What I love about your work is the emotion and flow, you are so easy to get into and read...........
and with it there is deep thought and beauty...............This was so sad, so descriptive that I will
remember it for a long time to come...........beautiful.

[Fran Marie]

a most captivating read from first to last lines
~wonderfully expressed and well penned~Fran Marie

[R J Askew]

Life often has nasty little surprises for us and this poem tells a great story of shattered life, disappointment and emotional brutality. But life ends for us all and with it all our accumulated screw ups and mishaps. A sustained piece of writing which kept the twist well hidden and milked the little glances and wry smiles wonderfully.

[Petey]

This has a great flow and wonderful movement of language. The words seemed to come from the here and then to separate speakers in a sense. Very enjoyable with a detail of old school style.

[Mountain Dawn]

Ordinary Woman sent this to me and I have to admit she know more about me than I thought. You wrote my life. As the tears fell from my eyes it made it hard to read. You see the last month of my ex husbands life was in my home with my new husband. We had been divorced for 9 years and we shared a 16 year old son and 21 yr.old daughter and an infant granddaughter who also lived with me when I remarried. Thankfully, we had stayed friends but because of his illness my new husband and I had him move in with us until he was back on his feet. Exactly one month & a day later, I found him on the floor, already gone. I thank the Creator every day that my children got to spend the last month of his life with him and that he was able to hold his granddaughter. My new husband was the one that actually invited him to stay in our home and I thank him daily too! You touched me like no other writer here.

[Yaooooooo]

Overall a good read, keep up the good work and feel free to send me a request when ever..
One!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Very touching .. so wonderfully written .. i like this so much .. you have a good style . a unique one ..
Makes one feel so sad for this poor man and his family he left..
Like Bubo, I will remember this also .. and we should be careful of the words we speak .. very good poem.

Chloe
xoxo

[Jenny Davis]

Eloquently scribed...I was enthralled with the sad, painted words...excellent stuff, I am glad I stumbled upon this (Thanks to Ordinary Woman.)

[Robert Luna]

What a wonderful vivid piece of writing the story itself was heart breaking but was written so perfectly. I truly was capture from start to finish and could not leave out one single word. This was wonderful.



Well Done!!!!!

[George Love]

A very emotional work. Well done!

[Genie]

This is astounding! Thanks to OW for sending it my way! My gracious, this is good -- sometimes the old structures fit the best, and the way you've told such a complete and heartwrenching story, amidst all its convoluted and misunderstood layers, is poetry at its absolute best.