The Image

The Image

A Poem by David Lewis Paget

I’ve been looking in the mirror
Every day since I was three,
Till a week ago I looked again
And saw it wasn’t me.
For this haggard face with wrinkles
And grey hair that should be black,
Took my place within the mirror,
And it stood there, staring back.

Sure, it registered surprise and seemed
To stare, and be in shock,
And behind me in the mirror stood
Our old grandfather clock,
It was ticking off the moments,
All that I had left of life,
So in case it was an omen, then
I thought I’d call the wife.

‘Can you see that ancient visage
In the glass, Penelope?
It’s supposed to be my image
But I think it isn’t me,’
And Penelope had stood and stared
Then shook her greying hair,
‘Yes, that scar was on your left cheek, dear,
But now it isn’t there.’

I was staring at the visage and
It gave me quite a fright,
For that scar upon my left cheek now
Showed firmly on the right.
And the parting in my hair was not
Just where it used to be,
For most everything was back to front,
So who the hell was he?

‘There’s a demon in the mirror,’
I exclaimed, ‘it has my mole,
And it’s come here from the devil just
To claim my mortal soul,’
So I seized a ball pein hammer and
Attacked the mirror glass,
Till it shattered into tiny shards,
That’s seven years, alas!

We’ve not allowed a mirror in
The house, from then to now,
We won’t invite a demon in,
We’ll keep him out, somehow.
We know we both are ageing, but
We’re not as bad as that,
Penelope will paint her face,
While I just wear a hat.

David Lewis Paget

© 2017 David Lewis Paget


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Love it. Very entertaining.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good tale about aging...well written...

Posted 6 Years Ago


Hilarious nothing more than

Posted 6 Years Ago


Extremely exhilarating

Posted 7 Years Ago


Anything involving mirrors is great stuff!

Interesting!

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is so so true. We hate seeing our ageing self. Not because we don't admit it but because it makes us succumb to mortality and stops us from doing things at our own pace, things we really want to do, just because we think we are running out of time.
Nice piece.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I am also not a big fan of mirror for the same valid reasons.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A amazing tale my friend. Those mirrors can make us feel old and weak. See strangers and ghosts. I see my father face today. Thank you David for sharing the outstanding tale.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on November 17, 2017
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David Lewis Paget
David Lewis Paget

Moonta, South Australia, Australia



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