Death Wish

She said she wanted to kill herself
Since her life was empty now,
I couldn’t figure it out myself
And called her a silly cow,
‘Your Barry isn’t the only one,
There’s more fish in the sea,’
But she just said that her love was dead,
‘He’s the only one for me.’

I wanted to tell her nonsense, that
She should take stock of me,
I’d be her friend to the living end,
I’d known, since she was three.
I told her once that I’d marry her
When we were both eight or nine,
But what I’d said must have left her head,
Lost in the mists of time.

It’s hard to be friends and lovers, both,
Though our friendship was sublime,
The love was buried in friendship, was
Invisible, undermined,
She missed the sparkle in both my eyes
Whenever she came my way,
I always wanted to tell her but
I didn’t have words to say.

Then Barry captured her from me when
She just turned seventeen,
He must have had something on me, though
I’d not see what she’d seen.
I should have known there was something on
When she turned from me out there,
And he came wandering in one day
With ribbons for her hair.

And that was the end of hopes and dreams
That I’d held from childhood days,
For Barry was full of exciting schemes,
She was thrilled in many ways,
She’d say, ‘I’ve never known anyone
Who excites me like he can,’
And from then on she was truly gone
And refused to hold my hand.

It only lasted a year or two
Until Barry lost the plot,
He found more interesting girls out there
Who’d got what she hadn’t got.
‘I don’t know what has gone wrong with us,’
She cried, all out of breath,
‘I won’t be sticking around, I know,
This life now seems like death.’

We went out walking along the cliff
She strayed too close to the top,
And said, ‘I think to myself, what if
I should suddenly drop,’
I pulled her down as she stepped too close
And pinned her onto to the ground,
‘What would my life be worth if you
Were suddenly not around?’

She looked at me in amazement as
She suddenly saw me there,
I kissed her once and she kissed me back,
‘I didn’t know that you’d care.’
‘You fool, I’ve loved you forever, but
I didn’t think it would show,’
‘My life is suddenly full,’ she said,
‘But I just needed to know.’

David Lewis Paget

Reviews

[Ellen Hammond]

Too bad in our youth we often seem blind to the love of a friend as we search for a relationship kind of love. Only as we grown older do many of us come to realize that a loving friend can become a wonderful partner and soul mate. Lovely poem, my friend. It stirred memories of years gone by.

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Good story. Loved reading it.

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful ending to a powerful tale my friend. You had me worry. Poor girl would jump. Thank you David for sharing the entertaining and worthwhile poetry.
Coyote

[Avinash]

Happy endings are such rarity in your works. But when it happens it makes everyone smile.

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

She didn't have a death wish after all. It was a love wish, a wish for completion in a world that can leave you feeling so all alone. Very well penned.

[Raj Sahu]

It is a beautiful poem. You penned it very nicely. I like the plot, story, theme and rhymes of the poem. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing. 😊