The Black Dog Run

The Black Dog Run

A Poem by David Lewis Paget

The hull was that of a freighter, merchant,
Old, but still under steam,
It rose from off the horizon, distant,
Out of somebody’s dream,
Its livery had been dull and black
But now it flaked and it peeled,
The paint rose up on bubbles of rust
It was once designed to have sealed.

And from its stack there was dark grey smoke
That rose and spread on the sea,
Fouling the air in a narrow track
So they wouldn’t be seen by me,
We put the coastal cutter about
And raised the flag in the sun,
So Sally could see we were headed out
As she went on the Black Dog run.

The day was done it was almost dusk
When we entered that trail of smoke,
The freighter, ‘Emily Greensleeves’ must
Have burnt off a ton of coke,
We only saw her faint through a haze
And never a single crew,
But only Sally up on the bridge
As the dog came rabbiting through.

The dog, as black as a tinker’s pot
Raced back and forth on the deck,
Not so much as a chain restraint
Or a collar stud at its neck,
It stood there slavering down at us
When we got up close with a gun,
And often we thought to pick it off
When out on the Black Dog run.

But then the freighter would slip away
Deep in its trail of smoke,
And we’d be left alone in the bay
Trying to breathe, not choke,
Others have said they will bring her in
This ghostly girl, with a gun,
But nobody’s able to pin her down
When out on the Black Dog run.

David Lewis Paget

© 2016 David Lewis Paget


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Another interesting story David.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Masterful. I love a story written in poetry, very vivid imagery.

Thank you for sharing this

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a real dark tale David, love the idea of the freighter run by a girl and that monster of a black dog and all that smoke filling the air, I can taste it even now, brilliant story telling my friend :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

One must go back for another pass there is wisdom and beauty in these lines along with experience with a ever so haunting beauty that cries with the freighter and chokes on the black smoke this is superb poetry at its best I exalt this piece

-chuck

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Uhh! The fiction writer in me is haunted by this one... Some of these lines are simply beautifully written!!
But now it flaked and it peeled,
The paint rose up on bubbles of rust
It was once designed to have sealed.

And from its stack there was dark grey smoke
That rose and spread on the sea,
Fouling the air in a narrow track
So they wouldn’t be seen by me,

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

M. L. F.

8 Years Ago

Still a fan-girl of your work David... Your poetry tells stories, just like my favorite, Edgar Allen.. read more
Very well written. It leaves me wanting to hear more of her story. Nice one. Valentine

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I enjoyed this tale. I wanted more.
"This ghostly girl, with a gun,
But nobody’s able to pin her down
When out on the Black Dog run."
You left me with good visions and place. Thank you David for sharing your outstanding poetry.
Coyote



Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Emily Greensleeves had seen better days , now she was destined to
Forever sail the "black dog run " with a brave free spirited girl Sally as her
Only remaining crew plus the slavering black dog,...what a mystery you
Have woven here on the "run".... I found this poem very eerie right from the
Start all the way through until the Emily Greensleeves slips away once again
In her trail of black smoke with the ghostly brave Sally with her gun, so if ever
Caught she Would bring her would be captors down into the churning smoky depths of
The sea....I could imagine this really happening your great use of imagery
Heightened the ethereal quality of this great poem.. I love this one!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Always enjoy poems about the mysteries of the sea's, you didn't disappoint David. Living in Ohio it brought back memories of watching the huge freighters on Lake Erie while we were in little 24' boats fishing for perch. Once again great imagery, thank you for another noble poem. Richie.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ahahaha "...the Black Dog run" .... a ghostly tease ..sailors are a superstitious lot ain't they matey!? always a pleasure to read your stories ..not disappointed ...wondered if it was going green and glad it did not .. at least overtly ..too much heaviness in real life these days ..one needs a break! :)
E.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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David Lewis Paget

Moonta, South Australia, Australia



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