The Abbot's Loft

The Abbot's Loft

A Poem by David Lewis Paget

They bet me I couldn’t spend the night

Locked up in the Abbot’s loft,

Up where recusants once, in fright

Would wait for the stake at Pentecost.

They’d once piled f*****s high in the square

And taunted all night long,

When peasants stood in the firelight

In a massive, cheering throng.

 

But that was hundreds of years ago

So of course I said I could,

I should have known there was something wrong

When I saw the man in the hood,

The loft was next to the church bell tower

And would creak when they pulled the rope

Of the giant bell that sat in its bower

To wait commands from the Pope.

 

I climbed the circular, rickety stair

And they came and locked me in,

There wasn’t a spark of light in there

It was dark, as black as sin,

And all there was was a narrow bed

On a hard, old wooden plank,

A single cover to keep me warm

But I knew just who to thank.

 

They played the silliest games, of course,

They would howl outside the door,

Just as I started to settle down

I would hear this terrible roar,

Somehow the timbers would start to creak

When they put a strain on the rope,

And then the bell with a sound like hell

Would boom, and I’d almost choke.

 

I lay the night in a fevered sleep

But I swear someone came in,

I felt a breeze from the open door

And that coarse, harsh breath of sin,

But then a gurgling, choking sound

As my hair stood up on end,

I stayed curled up in my dark surround

As the door creaked once, then slammed.

 

When morning came, a sliver of light

Shone in through a rafter beam,

It fell upon a terrible sight

A nightmare, wrapped in a dream,

A man, whose body lay by the bed

His throat all ragged and torn,

And blood in puddles of horrible dread,

I wished I’d never been born.

 

They must have rushed on up to my screams

Flung open the padlocked door,

Then stood in silence, staring at me

And what lay dead on the floor,

I saw him then, the man in the hood

He’d wanted someone to blame,

And there I was, all covered in blood

With friends to witness my shame.

 

They’d bet me I couldn’t spend the night

Locked up in the Abbot’s loft,

Up where recusants once, in fright

Would wait for the stake at Pentecost.

But now my nights are spent in a cell

Dreaming of death and blood,

And why he’d want to send me to hell

That infamous man in the hood.

 

David Lewis Paget

© 2015 David Lewis Paget


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Yowza darlin Dave! This Reaperesque hooded man was a creepy charachter indeed...reminded me of Christs visions of Satan cloaked and watching especially during the stations of the cross...
This had a very Edgar Allan Tell Tale or Casque of Amontillado feel...would have really liked one eerie line of dialogue from the hooded man or maybe your own voice disembodied alost..not recognising it as your own.

This would not have the punch it did without the intensity and bloodlust background of the recusants...of course you wound up on the stake here...persecuted by your own fear and madness. F*****s is such a strong, reactionary causing word..brave use here.knocks the wind outta ya. Would have been leary of it mihself doll but worked for you.

Mih favorite and most vivid from you yet...wide the f**k awake a 5 a.m will have to read it again later...thanks for the recommend dollface...and i think i missed it...but Happy Birthday!!
Love for you to read a piece..poem Romance Fitzgerald
Story Forbidden Fruits..both short

Love and wishes for redemption! Lol

Calamity of Jennifer

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Another creepy tale David.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Absolutely amazing! Terrific Job. I can not get enough of your poetry. Great job. I love your style. You have got yourself a fan for sure!


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

not a nice man to meet I'd say David, certainly one of your scariest characters and the poor guy locked away because of him, as always the best storyteller around, you could give King lessons :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Weaved a tale of eerie magic lol but did he do it! or it was a malevolent force?

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An incredibly eerie poem and just the right thing for me upon my return to Writer's Cafe. I absolutely love it, thank you for sharing this spine-chilling gem! Cheers, Lola.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

These few lines did a prodigious work. Much kudos to you :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diversity is your Strength....It is our Gift!!! Barbz

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This plays out like a late night Vincent Price movie. Great job

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Isn't this weird? When I view this poem on my phone, the word 'f*****s' is censored as 'f*****s', which is really bright of WritersCafe. So they want to protect my readers minds from a word that means lumps of wood. The Internet is a joke, isn't it?

Posted 8 Years Ago


Never pays to take a bet...does it? Sounds like one of his 'friends' got away with murder while he is paying for the crime. Well written. Valentine

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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David Lewis Paget

Moonta, South Australia, Australia



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