The House in the Lane

The House in the Lane

A Poem by David Lewis Paget

There’s not much of anything I can recall

From the time that we lived in the lane,

Only the puddles of rainwater eddying

With the wind’s gusting refrain.

Pamela knew, she was older than me

So absorbed all the essence of fear,

And many a time when she’d panic and whine

I would cry out ‘There’s nobody here!’

 

The trees were too tall and they ruled overall

By keeping the house in their shade,

The garden was cold and the rocks would grow mould

From the damp, in the part that I played.

The wind would come sniffing around from the trees

And shiver the hairs on my spine,

And then in a wheeze like a voice in the breeze,

‘You shouldn’t be here, this is mine!’

 

Our parents were never around it would seem,

Our time was spent mostly alone,

It’s true that I grew to be sensitive, too,

To the visions and sounds of my own.

But Pamela, she became crazy with fear

At every strange creak in that house,

So then when she’d scream, I’d say, ‘It’s a dream,’

And place a cloth over her mouth.

 

The house was three storeys, we never went up

To check out the topmost floor,

They said it was storage, and not ours to forage

So kept a stout lock on the door,

But Pamela said she heard noises above,

Like somebody padding around,

It couldn’t have been, or they would have been seen

Between the third floor and the ground.

 

But out from the garden I’d often look up

To stare at the sole window pane,

The one that was muddy, or could it be bloody,

The colour was almost the same.

It was strange they insisted the stairway was locked

Could there be a grim secret to hide,

The darkest of murders, hidden away

And the storeroom above? Well, they lied!

 

Then Pamela said that she saw someone,

A shadow that fell on the pane,

Strange that the mud had continued in place

In spite of the seasonal rain.

Muddy or bloody, it wouldn’t wash off

Though I stared and I stared, and I smiled,

The indistinct face that I saw staring back

Was the face of an evil child.

 

They say that the rest was over to me

Though I’ll never recall if it’s true,

It’s funny the things that you do in life

That you never thought you could do.

Pamela said I was quite the brat

But then Pamela’s such a liar,

All I recall is the face of a child

As the flames in the window grew higher.

 

David Lewis Paget

© 2015 David Lewis Paget


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

I really enjoyed your poem. Very eerie tale and it did make me think..the part that stick with me was, "Though I stared and I stared, and I smiled,
The indistinct face that I saw staring back
Was the face of an evil child." This really got to me.
Well written. Keep writing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

What an engaging read David - full of your talent for rhyming mystery - - a first rate scary poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I really enjoyed your poem. Very eerie tale and it did make me think..the part that stick with me was, "Though I stared and I stared, and I smiled,
The indistinct face that I saw staring back
Was the face of an evil child." This really got to me.
Well written. Keep writing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well told story David. Loved reading this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice poem, I really enjoyed it! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love the feel of this David, makes me remember old black and white movies and tales by M.R.James, that kinda creepy stuff that was part of my childhood viewing and in that sense this is a wonderful story and a great poem your creativity is immense my friend, I wonder what a book of stories would be like from you, entertaining of course but damned scary too I'd say, wonderful work :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You took me back to my youth and the house I grew up in. Damp grounds, locked crawl spaces...strange noises in the night. {Later found out these were my older brothers trying to scare us.]. Funny how one believes so much eerie stuff when they are young. Great story. Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marvaless story telling David.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is with your talent and the power of suggestion that you took me on a spine tingling journey. This, Master, is what storytelling, in any form, is all about! Your character was but a mere child with an older sister, both living in gruesome surroundings and so the story goes. Her visions and fears became his realities, no longer convincing her that she was in a dream state. Now, for a while, he was consumed with the fears that danced in her head, and when all was said and done, mud and blood didn't run.....but the flames in That window grew higher! Mind Control at its finest, DLP. Barbz

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very VC Adrews mashed with Amityville..love this eerie write...what a young, or old mind can do to convince you there is real to your fright! Some say thats the essence of big foot. The need to manifest reality into our primal fear..then some witness it for themselves and say its real and its here! I love in this story we are not quite sure exept for the permanent goo..think we have to wait a good ten years. And see if its started to oooooze...

Fun darlin! Them ole ghosts in our attics..love the personal touch of an older sissy..

Love and wishes for youthful ghost stories..really no better fun mystery!
Calamity of jen

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

583 Views
9 Reviews
Rating
Added on November 4, 2015
Last Updated on November 4, 2015
Tags: child, evil, creak, scream

Author

David Lewis Paget
David Lewis Paget

Moonta, South Australia, Australia



About
more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..