The Stepfather

The Stepfather

A Poem by David Lewis Paget

Since ever he came to live at our house

We’d never felt safe or sure,

So late at night we’d turn out the light

And block up the bedroom door,

We’d slide a heavy old chest in place

That he never could push right in,

We knew, with just one look at his face,

The man was riddled with sin.

 

Our mother, bless her, was long divorced,

Our father was gone for good,

He never called, and we were appalled

That he never came when he should.

‘Why do you need that man in the house,’

I said, ‘You have me and Drew.’

But she would smile, ‘Well, it’s been a while,

And there’s things that you can’t do.’

 

We didn’t know what she meant back then

For we were too young to know,

How a woman’s won, or she bears a son,

Where a man and a woman go.

We only knew he was far too nice

When he first came into our home,

His creepy fingers, they felt like ice

So we wished he’d leave us alone.

 

He’d wander about the house by night,

We’d hear him mounting the stair,

And feigning sleep, not let out a peep

When we heard him breathe out there.

He’d come to a halt by our bedroom door

And stand and listen, we thought,

The tears in my brother’s eyes would glisten

In fear that we’d be caught.

 

His frightful stare gave a mighty scare

When he fixed on Drew and I,

Our mother said it was really sad

That he had just one good eye.

His other eye, it was made of glass

He had lost that one in the war,

It never closed, so we both supposed

That he slept, but still he saw.

 

Our house lay at the top of a hill

And a milk cart stood outside,

Its great cartwheels were covered in steel

And to hold it, it was tied.

One day we loosened the holding chain

As he came out into the street,

And watched the cart as it rolled on down,

Knocking him off his feet.

 

A wheel rolled slowly over his head

As he gave a deathly sigh,

His brains on the road were grey and red

And the pressure popped his eye.

It lay and stared at the two of us,

Was accusing us then, and still,

The memory sits and stays with us

For we’d never meant to kill.

 

Our mother wailed, and our mother mourned

And she kept his one glass eye,

She propped it up on the mantelpiece

‘So he’s with us still,’ she’d sigh.

Drew would shudder and I would shake

As it followed us round the room,

We both grew up with a complex that

We’ll never get over soon.

 

David Lewis Paget

© 2015 David Lewis Paget


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Oh, wow, what a delightfully wonderfully intriguing piece ... I would say funny, but my instincts tell me there is more truth than poetry to this story via poem ... I do enjoy reading your heart penned to page, and this piece makes me pause, to be thankful, in remembering my own step dad who raised me like I was his own son ... Treating me better than his son ... We were best friends right up until he died in 1992 ...Most excellently penned, and cleverly witty too ...

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Oh wow. I really have been left speechless. The story you have penned here is intriguing, it left me wanting more. There isomer degree of honesty to this, I am unable to pin point exactly. Perhaps the guilt of a bad deed?
I love this one, I may even come back it in the future. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


When I read this it gave me the creeps as I felt shivers run down my spine. Great work David.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is one of the first pieces I've read on Writer's Café. It's very intriguing, so I went on and read more of your quality poems. ;-)
This poem has a wonderful flow. It's great how you can see either the stepfather or the children as bad -- very ambiguous. It might even demonstrate a misunderstanding and the characters' resulting points of view.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

well written piece .. very much intrigued

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

David David David! Once again, and now often, you excel at your work ,and you entertain. Brilliant!! bJust Bloody Brilliant!!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

stunning writing David and rather scary too, it must be a nightmare to be watched continually by the eye of the man you murdered, even if it is glass, you're a quality writer my friend :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. Certainly not the direction i thought it would. Great rhythmic feel and rhyme scheme.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh, wow, what a delightfully wonderfully intriguing piece ... I would say funny, but my instincts tell me there is more truth than poetry to this story via poem ... I do enjoy reading your heart penned to page, and this piece makes me pause, to be thankful, in remembering my own step dad who raised me like I was his own son ... Treating me better than his son ... We were best friends right up until he died in 1992 ...Most excellently penned, and cleverly witty too ...

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Well, they should never get over that complex. That was a terrible thing for them to do. It reminds me of that story by Poe, which title I can't remember, but you surely know the one I mean.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow i have said this before but I'm saying it again the imagery you create with you writes are so powerful and strong you can see every detail clearly!!
This was haunting.... him breathing at their bedroom door....totally made my fist clench and the anger rise!!
Brilliant write !!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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David Lewis Paget

Moonta, South Australia, Australia



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